Monday, January 26, 2026

John and Jan: deck/night finalish form

EXT. DECK - NIGHT

John and Jan in chaises under starry skies. Sliding glass doors to master bedroom, dimly lit by low-att lamp on nightstand.. 

JAN: Barb called while you were in the shower.

JOHN: I sense news.

JAN: Chloe's going to Texas when Hunter returns with Tom's ashes.

JOHN: Alright. For how long?

JAN: She comes back the Monday before the Thursday school starts.

JOHN: Alright. We should send Ruth and Wanda a card.

JAN: And flowers. 

JOHN: Bluebonnets. They'll fall in love with her.

JAN: Of course. We'll meet them.

JOHN: At her graduation. 

JAN: Good bet. 

JOHN: Speaking of which, Kate and Cedric are _________.

JAN: She and Ruth can compare family trees.

JOHN: She brought that up. 

JAN: I dreamt Barb and Brian were pregnant. 

JOHN: As in Barb being pregnant and Brian the unpregnant father.

JAN: Yes.

A moment.

JOHN: Their wedding announcement.  

A moment.

JAN: I bet you're right. Very good, Carl Jung.  

JOHN: First thing that came to mind.

JAN: It does feel inevitable. Doesn't it?

JOHN: It does. Speaking of Chloe's graduation.

Moment.

JAN: As in they'll announce after.

JOHN: A guess.

JAN: Good guess. 

JOHN: It's Chloe's, too.

JAN: Really?

JOHN: It came up on our drive. They'll marry, sell their houses, by in Morro.

JAN: Hmm.

JOHN: Right?

JAN: Anything regarding school?

JOHN: No. But Vietnam came up.

JAN: How?

JOHN: She asked how I didn't go. 

JAN: Oh.

JOHN: I'm surprised it took this long.

JAN: You talked?

JOHN: No. We set a date to. Maybe between her return from Texas and school starting.

JAN: Do we know if Tom went?

JOHN: We do. Army. First Air Cavalry. 

JAN: Like Brian's father.

JOHN: Yes. He doesn't have much time.

JAN: Barb told me.

Silence but for CRICKET.  

SHOOTING STAR crosses sky.

JOHN/JAN: See it?

They look at each other. 

JOHN/JAN: Let's go to bed.

They get up, hold hands, walk to and enter bedroom, remove robes, get in bed naked, John turns off the lamp.

John and Jan

1. In the Cayenne with Barbara and Chloe on way to airport. Re Jackie and Horse Day.

2. In the Cayenne on the way back. Barbara gets Hunter's call re Tom Walker. Middle name.

3. Next day at home, street view of Laramie trailer. John re EPA depo re Cheyenne, and The Plains Hotel, middle of January. Called Kate? 

4. At cafe. Chloe selfie with Jackie, Hunter and Tom with carved wooden bear. Last time aet foot in cowboy boots. John re Roy Rogers. Kate might have a photo,

5. Golf.

6. With Barbara and Chloe in boat on Lake Nacimiento.

7. On deck at night. Wine and starry skies. Chloe going to Texas when Hunter returns (with Tom's ashes). 

8. Hunter best seller. Call him (at flat). Re Chloe's birthday.

9. Chloe's birthday.