Wednesday, October 22, 2025

scene 4

scene 3




EXT. MIRROR LAKE PICNIC AREA, MEDICINE BOW N.F., WY - SUNSET

Wanda and DAISY, 70-ish, both in tennis shoes, pants, sweaters over t-shirts, sit at a bench, aimed at the small lake surrounded by trees and hill-sized rocky outcroppings. 

DAISY: You're going to miss our balmy winters.

Wanda smiles.

WANDA: Balmy is the hundred and four on Ruth's porch thermometer yesterday. 

DAISY: Thank goodness it's a dry heat.

WANDA: Ninety percent humidity dry. 

DAISY: Icky sticky. How cold does it get?

WANDA: Low twenties, but that's rare. Average lows in the mid-thirties. 

DAISY: Our average high.

WANDA: You should move down.

Daisy looks at her, Wanda looks at Daisy.

WANDA (CONT.): Seriously. I think you'd like Kerrville. Maybe giver it some thought..

Daisy considers this.  

DAISY: Alright. I will.

A RAINBOW TROUT leaps and splashes.

WANDA/DAISY: Rainbow.

WANDA/DAISY: Jinx.

Daisy gets her phone, finds and shows Wanda a selfie CLEM, mid-70s, has taken with Tom and Gil near a small fire in a pit made of rocks, on the banks of a small alpine lake. Patches of snow on the ground and covering the peaks of distant mountains. Tom and Ed sit on a log, Gil is kneeling behind them. Each wear flannel shirts and ballcaps, have three-day beards and are smiling. Tom uses both hands to display a huge rainbow trout.

Wanda and Daisy stare.  

WANDA: Gil has that framed in his den.

DAISY: He told me in the letter he sent with the card. Clem was so looking forward to their Port Aransas trip.

WANDA: So was Tom.

Daisy pockets phone, they watch the last of the sun dip out of view.

DAISY: Feel that temperature change?

WANDA: Sure do. 

A lull.

DAISY: Ready?

Wanda nods. They stand, walk out of view. Another FISH LEAP AND SPLASH.

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