Thursday, December 4, 2025

scene 22

sc, 21

EXT. HUNTER'S PATIO - NIGHT

Hunter, Tom and Chloe around the table post-dinner. Silverware on top of stacked plates pushed to center of table near glass pitcher of water, each with their half-empty glasses at hand. House lights off, starry sky. FAINT SPORADIC CRICKET CHIRP THROUGHOUT.

HUNTER: So Tom, do you and Wanda have plans for your twenty-fifth?

TOM: We do. Goin' to Hawaii. First time for both of us.

CHLOE: Which island?

TOM: Oahu. Doin' Waikiki the first few days, then a few more in a place called Kailua. I bet y'all been.  

Chloe and Hunter nod. 

CHLOE: I learned to surf at Maui.

TOM: Take a lesson?

CHLOE: My mom.

TOM: How old were ya?

CHLOE: Tenth birthday.

TOM: I reckon you're pretty good by now.

Chloe shrugs.

CHLOE: Not so much. Plenty of room for improvement.    

TOM: Wanda don't believe it but I'm set on takin' a lesson down the beach from our Waikiki hotel.

CHLOE: You should. And that's a great place to learn.

TOM: That's what I read. I'm sure I'll do plenty a fallin' but havin' fallen off plenty a horses, I'm bettin' the landin' will be a lot softer.

CHLOE: And it's warm water. That's cool.

TOM: So where do ya surf outta San Luis Obispo?

CHLOE: Pismo.

TOM: Water's prob'ly a little cooler than Hawaii.

CHLOE: Always a wetsuit. How cold does it get in Laramie in the winter?

TOM: Mighty cold. 

CHLOE: Below zero?

TOM: Plenty below plenty often, then ya add the wind and it can get a little uncomfortable. Ever been to Wyomin'?

CHLOE: My aunt Kate and her husband live in Wilson during the spring and summer. We're there every Fourth of July.  

TOM: So your aunt Kate is whose sister?

CHLOE: My grampa's. My mom's dad. John. My gramma is Jan.

TOM: Where do they live?

CHLOE: Paso Robles.

TOM: Well that ain't too far from San Luis Obispo, is it?

Chloe shakes her head.

CHLOE: Ever been to that part of California?

TOM: Closest I been was Bakersfield forty-somethin' years ago.

CHLOE: What were doing in Bakersfield.

TOM: Well, Chloe. I was whatcha call dryin' out. Know what that is?

CHLOE: Not drinking alcohol?

TOM: That's right. 

CHLOE: These days?

TOM: Me and Wanda will have a beer with friends after Thursday night square dance and a glass a wine when we're at Ruth's. We met at an A-A meeting. Married a year to the day later. On that note, I hope y'all'll excuse me to give 'em both a call before it gets too late.

Tom stands.

HUNTER: I hope you'll sign the guest book, Tom.

TOM: I will. Hope you don't mind signin' my copy of Foglost.

HUNTER: Happy to.

TOM: Chloe, thank you for a delicious supper. Hope ya don't mind sharin' the recipe.

Chloe nods.

HUNTER: I'm out here with coffee at sunrise, Tom, if you're up. 

TOM: See ya then. Goodnight, folks. 

HUNTER/CHLOE: Goodnight, Tom.

TOM: And thank y'all so much.

Hunter and Chloe watch Tom enter house, leave view.

HUNTER: If Jackie's could wrangle another horse, and Tom is able and willing...

CHLOE: Yes.

Hunter gets phone from pocket, speaks into it.

HUNTER: Jackie. 

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